camp writing

 REFLECTIVE WRITING - Year 5 & 6 Camp

You have prepared 3 slides of writing - Well done, but we’re not done yet!

It is your turn to turn them into a finished piece of writing. 

You will need to write two extra paragraphs - an Introduction to Year 5 & 6 Camp, and a Conclusion; how did you feel about camp once it was finished?

Introduction - Who, What, When, Where?

Me and my friend were in the hall waiting for our activities to start.

Paragraph One: Your Happy Moment

My happy moment was Kayaking was so much fun me and my friend Tumoe  were kayaking and we saw Talanoa fall out of the boat.

Paragraph Two: Your Challenging Moment

My most challenging moment was Riding bikes with Mr Jabcson was really challenging because if your foot touched the floor you were  out.

Paragraph Three: Your Proud Moment

My proudest moment was learning how to kayak with my friend.

Conclusion: How did you feel after all of that?

I felt happy spending the day with my friends and eating the yummy food.