It was a normal day in fairy land for Clarrie and Ella. They were on there way to school then suddenly the ground stared to shake Clarrie and Ella ran as quick as they could. They were somewhere they had never been "Clarrie i'm scared'' "it's okay Ella". They stared to walk they came across a brige ''wow look there's a butterfly.'' Clarrie and Ella did''t know where they were they were lost but they still continued walking suddenly they were't in the forest any more they where now in front of the school gate "that's weird" said Ella "yeah" said Clarrie the end.
Hi Victoria, well done on your story and awesome picture. I like the way you have used speech marks in your story, ka pai. What happened once they got to the school gate? You should continue on with this awesome story.
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thank you miss Szymanik
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ReplyDeleteGreat start to Clarrie and Ella's adventures. I love the background you have drawn, but I was hoping to see Clarrie and Ella. Maybe next time, right? Well Done Victoria!
Miss T.A